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PLch1 I am who I am page 19 by Xannador PLch1 I am who I am page 19 by Xannador

Page 19 of my comic "Pure Light"
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Happy new year guys! And to the guy who robbed my grandparents house on new years eve and stole more than 30 000 euros in jewelery....fuck you.

Looks like this comic is about to beat dreadzone jackass...yeeeey!

And for a moment, we got to see how Burner really feels. he might be a grumpy, jerky hothead. But he's still a kid... And YA the freedom flyers! No cynder Isn't evil in this comic.
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Noivoom Featured By Owner Edited Mar 12, 2015  Student
what happened to TJs wings? I'm pretty sure they didn't have feathers last page.

PS, when I seem to be criticizing a picture, its just me being crazy, complaining about the fact that I cant draw as well as you (partly because my paint sucks) and probably just having a mental breakdown at the moment.
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Firestormthedragolf Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
IS that what cinder looks like damn. She looks boss
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humanofprey Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Burner, just as Commander Shepard says "keep thinking like this and your life will already be hell". If you don't want to make a difference, then stop whining.

Nice work :thumbsup:
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Jedder7 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
Wicked profile in the 4th panel.
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BlackAlbatross1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
Oh, hell! Maybe I'd think like him.
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drahonlover Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Some one stole your grandparents jewerlly?! Jerkface skunkbag....
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cherryberry213 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
OH..MY..GOD~LOVEZ THE DESIGN YOU GAVE CYNDER!FANTASIC!
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Kal0wen Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Another great page!  I love how empty Burner's eyes look when he stops and reflects on the his life and the war.  I can tell that he is a truly broken person inside, but he would never show it on the outside. He has a much deeper personalty than he shows on the surface. 

Overall I give this page a 5 / 5 for character development. 

I do have one other comment related to the comic though.  Vale is obviously the main character in the story,  however he is the dragon we know the least about. Where does he come from?  What social class is he? Heck we don't even know what element(s) he is/are. Wow there's a lot of questions to be answered. 

I can't wait for the next page! 

Also I am sorry to hear about what happened to your grandparents, I wish there was something I could do to help catch who ever is responsible. 
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Dat comment :icondatassplz:
First off, thank you SO MUCH for the awesome comment, I appreciate it a lot!
I really made sure that there is character development in the comic. But for the moment, all I'm doing is showing who these characters really are. And that brings us to Vale....you know nothing about him? Good. He's supposed to be a guy that raises questions.

And I am working on the next page! It's just coming out a bit slowly XD

But they won't catch the criminals. Not in my country. They can come and go as they please. Nobody will stop them. HA, my grandparents neighboors got robbed YESTERDAY. I guess it won't be long before our house is next. Pretty creepy.
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Kal0wen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome, I always try to make my comments constructive. You know more than " Hey your arts awesome!". 

I like knowing exactly what people think about my art so I would figure most other people do to.   =)
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Rogue343 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Awesome work so far!
And they're very good characters you've made XD
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Thank you!
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Rogue343 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Anytime XD
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ShadowOfDarkAndLite Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NU, someone robbed your grandparents house? I hope they catch him or I will go to where your grandparents live and find him myself and he will be sorry. >:
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
ha ha. No, there is not a chance they will catch him. Not in my country. They don't even try.
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ShadowOfDarkAndLite Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lazy assholes. xD I need to get a whip and go beat the cops up lol. 
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LaraRodAndrade Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Ahh... He's got a point!
A Good point to be sure
Keep going 'cause I (or we?) need more! <3
"And to the guy who robbed my grandparents house on new years eve" This kind of motherfucker can't take a break. It's ridiculous how some people thinks that going out and f*cking with everybody's life is totally normal.
I'm sorry for your grandies... But my aunt just came back from the Grocerie Store and someone just had took her car too ;< 
It's a fucking happy NY Eve
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Eh! The next page is already in progress.

And no, they won't cash them. The cops aren't even trying. I think 20% of the houses in my street has gotten robbed in just a few days time. We cannot count on the police. 
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LaraRodAndrade Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Wooho!
Believe me, unless you're rich, probably you'll be ignored... That's f**king unfair
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aros093 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hoho, it's just getting better and better :D
But damn, he got the point.
Anyway, I really like the fourth panel. It looks awesome :D
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
thank you very much. :dummy:
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victordragon747 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Burner really has a point there, but he shouldn't yell at her like that, she's trying to cheer him up. 
I'm sorry to hear about the robbery at your granparent's house, hope that that fucker gets caught.
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
they won't get caught. The police doesn't even try to catch them. If you want to do something here in my country you don't have to count on our corrupt government but on yourself.

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victordragon747 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Yeah, I know how you feel, same happens in my country. Police and justice it's only for the rich, famous or powerful.
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
exactly.
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RusCSI Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The fourth panel reminded me of Night Phoenixes (or.. how are they called now?) :3
Oh, is blue fire considered a separate ability or it's an "update" of fire element?
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
For the moment they are nameless XD I'm thinking of Calling them something like dronix (dragon + Phoenix...ha ha...so original ._. ) since they are a sub specie.
Well, you can consider blue fire as a second element. It's possible because they are both fire abilities. I might haven't explained very well but ah, what the heck XD you can see it as an update yeah. or an expansion of it.
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RusCSI Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, dronix sounds nice. You can play with other words if you want, languages even. I often use foreign words for making names.
Alright, it'll be an update :P
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KK680 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ouch, that's a preety bleak way of seeing it, but still, atleast they are surviving unlike the other cities of Avalar. Plus they sayd the war with Malefor would probobly end in death, but that changed when Spyro came, who says someone else can't change the stance here aswell?

Also, happy newyear!
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Yeah, when Malefor came, Spyro stood up to him. But now Spyro has come and nobody can do anything....or maybe I am wrong...

he he, happy new year to you too!
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Arkin-Fyrdraca Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yay awesome! :3  Freedom Flyers! :la:

And your grandparents house was robbed? D:  That guy sucks, hopefully he goes to jail. v_v
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
yes they are!

and no, he won't get caught. The police doesn't even try to catch them though more than 3 houses in just my street have gotten robbed in just a few days.
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Arkin-Fyrdraca Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Fff that sucks. ;.; When I'm a cop I would try my very best to catch the culprit
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LightningDraco Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
He's got a point too.
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Dantedragon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man...such a harsh reality burners facing....
wonderful page as well ^^
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:iconxannador:
Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
harsh reality, you have no idea XD
thank you very much!
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Dantedragon Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mmmm i guess not XD
your very welcome ^^
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Ninuturu Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Burners design is so nice :aww:
And nice page again :D
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:iconxannador:
Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
oh really? Good. Cause you'll have to see his face for a long time!
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Ninuturu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome :)
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TheDeadlyMillipede Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
HA! In your face Burner! Combustion can use WHITE FIRE :iconbitchpleaseplz:

Also your art is getting better! I can tell! 8D
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
bitch please. Burner doesn't even need fire to beat her :iconmingplz:

I wish I could say the same of yours but you can't judge art that isn't there :trollface:
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TheDeadlyMillipede Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Well bitch bitch please, neither does Combustion :iconepicstareplz:

:iconangryfaceplz: I will find you, and I will kill you
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juju712 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
(the attention of many)

I don't know what, but I feel something... off, or odd, in this page. I think this is the eyes, but I can't put the finger on it.

Burner seems really depressed, but it's too early to agree ot disagree.
The head in the fourth panel is AWESOME!
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Xannador Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
(thank you, fixed it!)

Ah yeah...I don't really like this page. Most of the faces and expressions came out messed up. Especially the first panel. But oh well. Maybe next page will be better!

And thank you very much!
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juju712 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Welcome. :-)
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BloodDragonJL Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
When we are hit with harsh reality and the masses and disheartened.....it's when one it can make the diference...after he or she cross the road full of spines the same people put in front of him......

I wonder the conviction of that individual.....when even the one he care fear him.
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